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At the age of 28, Mr. Gao suffered from eye discomfort and went to the hospital for treatment. He was suspected of glaucoma and needed long-term monitoring. Over the years, Mr. Gao’s eyes have nothing to do, but he has exacerbated the obsessive-compulsive disorder that he had. He lives in fear of blindness all the time, and everything is connected to his eyes. Many times, he had to stop what he was doing to fight obsessive-compulsive disorder. Day after day, his mind was shredded, and it was difficult for him to concentrate on doing one thing. But he still resists taking medicine, and he is afraid of taking medicine to induce glaucoma.

If it is my child, if it is the same situation, I will try it first.

Mr. Gao looked at He Jiankui’s answer and imagined the possibility of modifying his own genes someday. He immediately realized that he was wrong. He used his left thumb to mark his thumb on the index finger, and left his left index finger on the right middle finger to form an “X” to break his own thoughts.

In the “People” novel class, the homework of the writer Hao Jingfang is: write a synopsis of the story. The following is the twelfth article of the excellent homework series of the novel class, and it is also the fourth story outline.

Mr. Gao recently paid close attention to the news of genetic editing babies. Know the nouns like CCR5. But still very scared, I always feel that the world is going to get out of hand.

Mr. Gao is a very lively person. It is necessary to change from inside to outside when entering the house. The express delivery is never removed from the house, and the smog is to take the three-layer mask before going out.

Mr. Gao suffered from ankylosing spondylitis in his childhood. When other children are running around on the road without worry, he has to infuse in the infirmary. He spent the entire second semester of the fourth grade in the infirmary, losing from twelve to six in the afternoon. He stared at the clock, looked at it, watched it turn a little bit, it was easy to turn, and the sky was dark. At first, when they were arthritis, they used a lot of antibiotics. Sometimes the condition is stable, he ran out to Sahuan, thinking that he was full of blood to return to the level of cross-country champions, riding bicycles and competitions with his friends. Tiredness makes it easy for the disease to recur. Then infusion, drinking Chinese medicine, plastering, various remedies… This cycle was diagnosed until the age of sixteen. The condition was stable, but Mr. Gao did not have the vitality of the past. In his twenties, the blood vessels on the back of his hand were densely packed with scars of the infusion. When Mr. Gao told a friend about the suffering he suffered when he was young, he would put his hand back to the other side, like a veteran showing his gunshot wound.

At the age of 28, Mr. Gao suffered from eye discomfort and went to the hospital for treatment. He was suspected of glaucoma and needed long-term monitoring. Over the years, Mr. Gao’s eyes have nothing to do, but he has exacerbated the obsessive-compulsive disorder that he had. He lives in fear of blindness all the time, and everything is connected to his eyes. Many times, he had to stop what he was doing to fight obsessive-compulsive disorder. Day after day, his mind was shredded, and it was difficult for him to concentrate on doing one thing. But he still resists taking medicine, and he is afraid of taking medicine to induce glaucoma.

If it is my child, if it is the same situation, I will try it first.

Mr. Gao looked at He Jiankui’s answer and imagined the possibility of modifying his own genes someday. He immediately realized that he was wrong. He used his left thumb to mark his thumb on the index finger, and left his left index finger on the right middle finger to form an “X” to break his own thoughts.

“I don’t think so, my eyes are fine, my genes are not wrong.” He said to himself, deliberately slowing down his mind, double-solving the idea just now, and avoiding it. In the process of cracking, there are new bad ideas flashing, Mr. Gao must catch it and crack it in detail. The more you crack, the more ideas you have. Often, this has not been cracked yet, and the new one flashes again. It’s just a press of the gourd. Sometimes it’s easy to crack the previous one, but the next one can’t remember it. Mr. Gao also struggling to recall what just a fleeting idea in the end yes.

While Mr. Gao was losing his life, Gao Tai told him to eat. Mr. Gao is more and more annoyed. He tempered and tossed for a long time before getting up and going to the bathroom to wash his hands.

At dinner, Mr. Gao expressed his dissatisfaction with the dinner. He said that eating cabbage and potatoes in the winter would be good. Don’t eat off-season foods. There are too many additives. Mrs. Gao said that cabbage and potatoes all day, the son does not like to eat. The child has finished eating and is writing homework. Mr. Gao snorted and expressed his dissatisfaction.

Mrs. Gao asked Mr. Gao if he did not know the person at the esophagus. The cousin of her cousin’s kindergarten was not closed in the spot check, mainly because the area was not enough and was shut down. The head of the garden asked the parents to find a solution because they did not want their children to eat the meal from the delivery company.

While asking the details, Mr. Gao stopped the chopsticks and quietly used his secret method to crack his mind under the dinner table. In the end, it is impossible to think about it. Mrs. Gao is very disappointed. Speaking of it, Mr. Gao is a civil servant and very beautiful. In fact, Mr. Gao is only a member of his age. Little things can’t be done by the Lord, and big things can’t be said. The classmates asked for a few times and did not help. Gradually, the high wife is not in that position in the circle. This makes Gao Taitai very lost. She often secretly pities herself and regrets marrying the wrong person…

After dinner, Mr. Gao tutored the child to do homework, which is the task assigned by Gao Tai.

With a score application question, Mr. Gao tried to guide the child to think independently and come up with the answer. But the child always wants Mr. Gao to tell him directly. This makes Mr. Gao very angry. He suppressed his anger and led the child to think over and over again. But the child’s brain seems to want to strike, even if you think about it, you can’t say it.

Mr. Gao, while tutoring his children’s homework, struggled with the ideas in his mind. I often say that half of it stops, and I will quietly do all kinds of strange moves behind my back. The child looked inexplicably and felt that his father’s mind was elusive.

When Mr. Gao asked the children to do the problem, browse the phone. Some companies sent WeChat to consult matters. Mr. Gao is very angry, cursing in his heart, don’t you rest, and don’t let others rest? Do not understand the rest time of others. He turned to think about it, the end of the year, the business is busy. Small businesses are not easy. He took a deep breath and let the company come over tomorrow morning, and the company expressed its gratitude.

When the third boot failed, Mr. Gao finally broke out. Reprimand the child, what do you do in class every day? When you look at you, you know that you are better than eating, and you don’t do it.

Mrs. Gao was cleaning up in the dining room and heard it. The two squashed a few words. Mr. Gao was so angry that he was lying back to the house.

The more he wants, the more angry he is. First of all, if your child does not live up to expectations, then he will not follow himself. Then, the hate-in-law parents spoiled the child in the child’s hour, and the study habits were not developed. Then I feel that my wife is not good and my IQ is not high. Of course, he hates himself more. Hate yourself is always in a state. There are too few children. I also feel that the bigger the child, the worse it is. The resentment, helplessness, disappointment, and the troubles caused by the various ideas during the period made Mr. Gao feel like a balloon. As long as the “bang” explosion was a pleasure, it was lost.

He took a deep breath and decided to stay with him from tomorrow. The night gradually deepened and the child’s sobs disappeared. Mr. Gao can’t sleep at all. He climbed up and went to the study to continue his novel creation. It is creation, just read it again.

That is a martial arts novel. The protagonist is the head of a cabinet, standing at the peak of life, everything. Mr. Gao has placed his hopes on life on him. But perhaps it is lack of imagination, perhaps obsessive-compulsive disorder causes speech, and the click rate is very poor. In short, the possibility of eating by writing is getting smaller.

Mr. Gao looked at the hot texts with high click-through rates on the Internet, and he did not care about it. He was thinking about it and clicking it in random. An article about Japanese writers caught his attention. The article mentioned that the reporter asked Akutagawa Ryunosuke how to become a writer, Akutagawa answered, there is a tragic childhood. Mr. Gao wants his life to be too lacking. Because he was sick and sick from childhood, his parents were too spoiled for him. Even relatives let him. He vaguely looked forward to some disasters in exchange for his achievements in writing. He immediately realized that this idea was wrong, and he seriously solved it. Make sure the disaster does not come. He continued to hang out online. Watching the news, watching the novels, watching the gossip, one hour after another. His eyes began to feel uncomfortable, dry, awkward, painful, and bloated. He began to worry about the eyes. He began to crack the idea that is not conducive to the eyes, even if there is no rest at rest, and watching the computer for a long time, the eyes will not have anything…

He went to sleep in the middle of the night. I was sore in the morning, I really wanted to take a day off, but I had already made an appointment with the company and had to work hard to get to work.

He made his 505th decision last night and plans to work hard today to take good care of the children. After reading some information, I found that the words were in my eyes, I couldn’t see them in my heart, and my claws were as uncomfortable as my heart. When he was bored, he was hanging out on the Internet. When it was seen that the eyes were uncomfortable, the company that made the appointment came. Mr. Gao pressed her irritability and looked at her materials. According to the regulations, this material should be sent to the higher authorities for review, and there is still one less. Mr. Gao saw that the other party was a pregnant woman, and he started to express his heart. He said that he could express it over and said that he would not be able to send it today. He will send it tomorrow, and the company promised to go.

The company just came out and came back and asked where to send it, because it was really anxious, they led to know some people and wanted to say hello. Mr. Gao hesitated and told her. I only said which tricks should be sent according to the regulations, not to mention specific people.

In the afternoon, the company called and asked if the flash was received, and asked if it would be sent tomorrow morning. Mr. Gao is out of anger, saying that you take the materials away, please also Gao Ming.

The company sent a message to Mr. Gao and apologized again and again. When the boss forced her to fight, she could not do anything. She knows that Mr. Gao is very caring for her and often gives her a step in handling it. I am very sorry. Mr. Gao explained that it was really inconvenient to ask someone tomorrow morning, and she asked her to understand.

Near the time of work, Mr. Gao received a phone call from the higher authorities and asked about the material. Mr. Gao is angry and honest. He sent it today. The materials are not in order. They will be assembled in the afternoon. I will meet the company tomorrow morning and send it in the afternoon. Is this a mistake? It is impossible for her to arrange my work. If every company asks so, how can my work be carried out! The tone of the other party has eased, and the old high and the old are high. Don’t worry…

Mr. Gao asked the company, the company said that he did not know, and asked the leader before he knew the phone call of the leader. She is also speechless.

Mr. Gao is angry. I feel that human nature is like this! Why are you so selfish? I asked myself if I didn’t feel sorry about this business. They actually did this. He really regrets telling them where the materials are going.

He went home with a low mood. As soon as I entered the door, I saw a black dirty courier on the ground. Counseling children to do homework, the child still does not think for himself. Mr. Gao broke out again, accusing the child of being stupid, accusing the high-powered wife of not being dismantled and then taking it in. Mrs. Gao is also angry, and asks Mr. Gao what nerves! The two broke out in a fierce quarrel and said a lot of words that hurt each other. Mr. Gao accused his parents of ruining the child. Mrs. Gao said that Mr. Gao did not have the skills. Also said, don’t do your daydreaming. Write a manuscript all day long and write something. If it’s not that you are hot and cold all day, moody, the child is so scared! Mr. Gao left in anger. The door slammed into the door and shook the child.

Mr. Gao drove on the loop in the car. The faster you open. I really want to die. After almost hitting a big car, I was shocked by a cold sweat. He parked the car in the emergency lane and started a double flash. Open the music with ease, breathing deeply with the soothing melody. Slowly, his mood calmed down. He remembered his elderly parents, remembered the poor and sensible children, remembered the capable wife, remembered the two houses that he had relocated, and remembered the decent work…

He wondered if he wanted too much.

He sent a WeChat to the counselor and made an appointment for the consultation.

Really not, or take some medicine, he thought.

In any case, life has to continue.

Anyway, tomorrow is a new day.

He slowly started the car and headed for the home.

The advantage of this synopsis is that there are so many details, it is very real, and the characters in the heart are very clearly written and feel the same. Good novels need these real details to be full and make people feel power.

But the problem is that the current synopsis of the novel is too flat from beginning to end. The beginning of the story is that the protagonist’s obsessive-compulsive disorder is very serious. At the end of the story, the protagonist’s obsessive-compulsive disorder is very serious. This is a repetitive plot in story creation.

It is recommended that there be an ups and downs of the main storyline, and you can edit events like babies around genes. The protagonist and wife may have a second child who chooses whether to do a genetic editing experiment. They began to agree, and later refused to agree, and later promised, when experimenting…

Around the beginning and end of this incident, other details of the reaction to obsessive-compulsive disorder can be integrated to support the main line. Of course, you can also use genetic editing events, and you can use other events. But only when there is a specific event, all the details make sense, and the structure of the story is complete and powerful.

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